Writing Exercise – The Katuata (Mondo)

by | September 6, 2016 | Writing Exercise | 4 comments

 by Ashley Lister

Have you been naughty?
Do you need a good spanking?
Which paddle should I select?


I have been naughty.
I deserve your punishment.
Please use the studded paddle.

We’re all familiar with the haiku: the poetic
form, imported from Japanese culture, and interpreted by western poets as a three-line
stanza with a syllable count of 5-7-5. 

Less familiar, but similar in many ways to
the haiku, is the katuata.  In its Japanese
form the poem was made up of 19 onji, which we’ve translated as syllables. Most
authorities give the Katuata a three-line form structure of 5-7-7.

One of the popular applications of this form
is the mondo: a poem traditionally written by two poets and presented in the
form of a question and answer. The first stanza is the question, the second is the response.  

As a tool for helping with collaboration, this
is clearly an apposite way to begin a writing partnership.  However,
as a fun way of getting two characters talking, or simply challenging the
artistic imagination, writing the brief exchange of a mondo at the start of a
writing session is an effective way to kick-start creativity.

Your plans for tonight?
House of Cards
or
Breaking Bad?
Or
Pretty Little Liars?


Let’s be more daring.
Forget this Netflix and chill
We’ll make our own blockbuster

As always, I look forward to seeing your
poems in the comments box below.

Ashley Lister

Ashley Lister is a UK author responsible for more than two-dozen erotic novels written under a variety of pseudonyms. His most recent work, a non-fiction book recounting the exploits of UK swingers, is his second title published under his own name: Swingers: Female Confidential by Ashley Lister (Virgin Books; ISBN: 0753513439) Ashley’s non-fiction has appeared in a variety of magazines, including Forum, Chapter & Verse and The International Journal of Erotica. Nexus, Chimera and Silver Moon have published his full-length fiction, with shorter stories appearing in anthologies edited by Maxim Jakubowski, Rachel Kramer Bussel and Mitzi Szereto. He is very proud to be a regular contributor to ERWA.

4 Comments

  1. Lisabet Sarai

    These don't quite strike me as Japanese…!

    I'll see what I can come up with.

  2. Lisabet Sarai

    Catch (Katuata — Mondo)
    By Lisabet Sarai

    Seine of red-dyed hemp
    constrains and liberates me.
    Carp flash in a shallow pond.

    In my scarlet net
    suspended, wet, you ripple.
    River singing over stone.

  3. Ashley Lister

    Wow – that was certainly worth waiting for. That final line is such a striking image.

  4. Lisabet Sarai

    Thanks! (I am pretty pleased with it myself.)

    I was aiming for a Japanese vibe. (No, I am not talking about an Asian sex toy LOL!)

    Surprising how long it took to craft this, though – a couple of hours for 38 syllables!

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