By Ashley Lister
One of the reasons why I advocate using poetry as a warm up
exercise for writing is because it gets us to think about words in different
ways. When we write poems like the limerick or the sonnet, we end up
considering rhyme patterns. When we write poems like haiku and cinquain, we
count the syllables. When we write poems
like the triolet or the rictameter, we consider the impact of refrains and the effectiveness
of repetition. This month we’re looking at the diamond poem and considering word
classes.
Ass
Plump,
Round
Quivers,
trembles, anticipates
Hand, paddle,
crop, cane.
Shouting, shrieking, screaming
Reddened,
punished
Cheeks
The diamond poem is seven lines long. 1 x noun, 2 x
adjective, 3 x verb, 4 x noun, 3 x verb, 2 x adjective, 1 x noun.
As I
mentioned before, the benefits from this exercise are considering word classes
and how they are used. Also, as a piece of concrete poetry, I do think diamond
poems look pretty on the page. Another added bonus is, because of the absence
of prepositions, they tend to sound like ‘proper’ poetry.
Toys
Hidden,
forbidden
Buzzing,
sliding, gyrating
Dildos, clamps,
clips, vibrators
Plug, Play,
Please
Private, adult
Toys
As always, I look forward to
seeing your diamond poems in the comments box below.